There is a place where I'm so tangled up in emotion that I can do nothing but feel. At times I feel safe and protected within those ties, but other times I feel like I've been let go and the fall has been hopelessly suspended because those ties won't let me go. This came from that tangled up place. It is what it is...
that bitch
the one thought tears at you
you are the one who will do
easily used quickly left
at the moment of highest pleasure
a wrenching pain
the body betrays
straining for his release
a release he needs
without the caring you crave
you pull back
he feels it in the touch
sees it in your eyes
stop me
those hands let you plummet
a tear falls a head turns
bastard
letting you retreat he releases
a release that shatters
more than your body
damn
coward
you
February 1, 2008
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4 comments:
Wow. Very powerful.
damn, that was quite descriptive
hmmmm
strong words
I like this...more emotion than the sex story...seems raw...i like it,
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